The pie charts show the average consumption of food in the world in 2008

The pie charts show the average consumption of food in the world in 2008
The main pie chart gives us pieces of data about the
consumption
of different categories of
food
around the
world
as well as
in
China
and
India
in 2008.
Overall
,
it is clear that
processed meal was the category of
food
the most popular on earth in the year 2008.
However
, for the other
categories
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some differences can be seen. Indeed, processed
food
represented 41% of the
world
's average
consumption
.
India
confirms
this
trend with
a
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consumption
of
this
type of
food
equal to 39%.
However
a decrease can be observed in
China
, processed
food
represented 34% of sources of
consumption
of
food
. In the
world
and in
China
, vegetables and fruits represented the second source of
food
consumption
with 29% and 32% respectively. Animal
food
was the second source of alimentation for
India
with 27% of the total
consumption
while
it was the third source in the
world
representing 26% of the global
consumption
. Nuts and seeds were not extremely popular in the
world
representing 4% of global
consumption
.
However
, in
China
, it was the third origin of alimentation with 19%
whereas
in
India
it represented 11% of
food
consumption
.
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