You plan to do some traveling in a few months. You would like to visit an old friend who lives in another country. You haven’t spoken to this friend in a few years. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - Provide a short update about your life since you saw him/her last - Explain why you will be traveling to his/her city - Say what you would like to do when you visit his/her city

#plan #months #visit #friend #lives #country #haven’t #years #life #city

Dear XXX,

This

is Fanchang. I hope

this

letter finds you well. I have been working as a financial analyst since our

last

met. In order to serve my clients better, my employer required me to finish the Charted Financial Analyst exams before 2023, which is the reason why I have been so busy during the past two years. But the good news is that I have successfully passed the tests and as of now, I would like to take a visit to Toronto in no time. I am thrilled to go to the Rogers Center in downtown Toronto with you again.

Therefore

, I have purchased two tickets for the NBA game night. After the match, we could go to the

Redlobster

Correct your spelling

Red lobster

as I really miss the seafood there! Please let me know whether you are available next week. And should you have any concerns, please do not

hestitate

Correct your spelling

hesitate

to email me back. See you soon, Fanchang Kong, CFA, FRM

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