Demand for gas or oil is increasing and so finding new resources in remote and untouched area is a necessity. Do the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages?

The

posibility

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possibility

of finding new sources that can supply the currently raising demand for

gas

and

oil

is becoming a priority.

This

is leading to considering the

explotation

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exploitation

of zones that

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never been altered in the past.

To begin

with, natural resources

such

oil

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and

gas

play a supreme role in the

dinamic

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dynamic

dynamics

of the global

economy

.

Oil

and

gas derived

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products are

essencial

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essential

to the functioning of industries and transportation which

consequently

impact

in

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our daily life.

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, the scarcity of

gas

,

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leads to an increment

of

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in

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gas

prices

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therefore

transportation prices increase which at the same time

make

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goods and products

such

food

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and clothes more expensive.

Thus

, finding new places to obtain the

above mentioned

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natural resources is vital in order to boost

economy

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and facilitate everyday life.

On the other hand

, the

explotation

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exploitation

exploration

of unexplored and preserved territories not only negatively

impact

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the lives of animals and people living in the area or its surroundings but

also

destroy the ecosystem.

For example

, the

explotations

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exploitations

exploitation

explorations

of

occuring

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occurring

the Amazonian rainforest have displaced native tribes that have dwelled there for generations and do not know how to

survived

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out

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outside

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of

this

habitat, as well

putting

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as putting

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in

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risk and

destroy

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natural habitat of endemic animals and plants that were at a high risk of

extintion

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extinction

.

Hence

, the search

of

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new resources to improve the

economy

and

therefore

our lives

is

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at the same time jeopardising the existence of

live

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on our planet.

To sum up

, the advantages of obtaining a

high value

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natural resource

such

oil

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as oil

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and

gas

from new habitats in order to improve our

economy

and

therefore

our lives, do not

outweight

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outweigh

the disadvantages that it represents

such

as losing invaluable species that are

impressindble

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impressionable

for the conservation of

live

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on the planet.