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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the numbers of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

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Actual statistics have shown that the quota of young adults is approximatively bigger than
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 population in some countries around the globe, in the next lines, we will discuss if the advantages of
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 situation outweigh the disadvantages Undoubtedly, if the majority of the population are young adults, surely it’s a positive sign,
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 active community helps the economy to grow fast and to vary in many ranges because of their energy, productive outcome, and innovative ideas,
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, the young individual is capable to build families, as result preserve the continuous growth of young population, which is the most precious factor in community existence and development over the centuries ,
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, Muslim countries have the highest rate of
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 nation because they value family life and they prioritize having kids in their early age, In the same context, but from a different perspective, if the country includes a high rate of elder, certainly at some point the economy will start to fall off because, elders in
this
 stage consume more than they produce,
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, the percentage of young people keep decreasing
due to
 aversion for marriage,
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 the older folk quota
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 increasing as noticed in European countries, for ,example Italy which know now as an old country growing older,
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 I believe that their presence is mandatory in order to hand over society's traditions to the next generation, in conclusion and from what has been mentioned above, I deeply believe that it’s essential to have more young adults in the country than elders in order to avoid an economic slowdown,
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