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What Is the Global Warming Crisis? - A Global Warming Solution

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Global warming has a huge impact on the
earth
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Earth
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. The
world
 has been facing many effects
from
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 global warming and I will cover these issues and some resolutions in
this
 essay.
Firstly
, global warming is a phenomenon where the earth’s average temperature rises
due to
 increased amounts of greenhouse
gasses
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gases
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such
 as carbon dioxide and methane. Increased carbon dioxide destroys ozone layers, which usually block the incoming radiation from the sun, and trap radiation from leaving
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the earth
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earth
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Earth
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. Once the temperature goes up, polar ice caps begin to melt, which leads to a rise in sea levels.
This
 circumstance has influenced some animals,
such
 as polar bears
suffering
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 from habitat loss and food shortage, to a large extent. Climate change,
such
 as frequent and intense droughts and storms, will most likely cause more natural disasters and more calamity relief funds will be required.
Moreover
, epidemics
such
 as mosquito-borne diseases may spread around the
world
.
Secondly
, not only governments but
also
 individuals need to take action to solve
this
world
 issue. Greenhouse emissions are generated mainly by industries and transportation and deforestation worsens the situation.
Therefore
, Governments can create new rules against deforestation and arrange more afforestation programmes to absorb more carbon dioxide. New sources of energy, which are sustainable and environmentally friendly, need to be found. Green energy can be utilized for transportation. Switching to LED light bulbs and
energy efficient
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 appliances
contribute
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contributes
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 to reducing greenhouse gasses as well.
To conclude
,
although
 global warming has many negative effects around the
world
, I believe the intervention, ranging from countries to every single person, would deal with
this
 problem.
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