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In some countries, more and more people are hiring a personal fitness trainer, rather than playing sports or doing exercise classes. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or a negative development?

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In
this
 modern era, many
people
 prefer to hire a professional
fitness
trainer
, rather than
joining
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join
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 gym classes or playing sports. There are some reasons why
people
 choose a personal
trainer
 and I think the benefits of
this
 development are more significant
that
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which
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 will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
To begin
 with, some
people
 may want to be private when they doing
exercise
 and a private
sport
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sports
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trainer
 could more focus to help trainees when they doing
the
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apply
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sports. First of all, some
people
 might get many
distraction
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distractions
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 when they go to
the
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sport
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sports
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 classes.
For instance
,
people
 may
do
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not feel comfortable in
the
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crowded place
such
 as public sports. Since many
people
 will
also
going
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go
be going
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 to the place,
people
 will choose
a private classes
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a private class
private classes
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 so they can focus on training.
Moreover
, if
people
 have a private teacher in
fitness
, the trainers could help the trainees intensively and tell them how to do
exercise
such
 as using
fitness
tools
 in the right way.
As a result
,
people
 could maintain their
body
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bodies
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 using the
tools
.
Furthermore
, the trend of hiring
personal
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a personal
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guide
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guides
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 in
fitness
 gives two benefits.
First,
people
 could avoid accidents when they
doing
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do
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fitness
through
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by
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 following
the
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apply
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guidance from
the
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a
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 professional. Many accidents could happen
to
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when
people
 go to the gym.
This
 is because they do not know how to use the
tools
.
Therefore
, hiring a professional
trainer
 is the solution to tell
people
 how to utilize
the
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gym
tools
. The
last
 benefit is
people
 will have a special schedule from the
trainer
. The muscles that
people
 train after several times need a break time. Because of that
trainer
 could give the information about what days they should
doing
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do
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exercise
 in order to build their bodies properly.
To sum up
, the reason that
people
 use professional
trainer
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trainers
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 is
because
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that
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 they want to have a private space when they doing training to avoid distraction from others and the
trainer
 could help the trainee intensively when they want to use special
sport
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sports
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tools
. I think the personal guide could give benefits namely to avoid accidents
while
 training and give special schedule to doing
exercise
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • personalized workout plans
  • tailored
  • efficient
  • awareness
  • physical health
  • motivation
  • guidance
  • convenience
  • flexibility
  • exclusivity
  • status symbol
  • inaccessible
  • community engagement
  • social interaction
  • health outcomes
  • personal achievement
  • health-conscious
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