The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries, namely the USA, Sweden, and Japan.
The given line graph depicts modification in the percentage of children
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1920.
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, it can be seen that the birth
rates for both China
and the USA
decreased over the period
surveyed. Although
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USA
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At the beginning of the period
in 1920, the birth
rate
for
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in
USA
was 11%, which was 1% higher than China
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of China
, reaching 15%. In addition
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started growing, hitting a peak at 20% for China
and 15% for the US.
Looking at the chart for more detail, after peaking out, the birth
rate
of
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in
China
fell sharply and hit the lowest point by 2000, with around just 2%. With the exception of the USAof
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, a steady drop was seen in itsit’s
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figures
, reaching approximately 7% at the end
of the period
. It is noticeable that the figures
for America wereAmerica was
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