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The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries, namely the USA, Sweden, and Japan.

The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries, namely the USA, Sweden, and Japan.
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The given line graph depicts modification in the percentage of children
bornborne
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born borne
of
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in
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 2 different countries over
a
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 80-year
period
, starting
fromform
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from form
 1920.
Overall
, it can be seen that the
birth
 rates for both
China
 and the
USA
 decreased over the
period
 surveyed.
Although
thesethis
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these this
 two
figures
shareshared
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share shared
 the same downward trend,
thebut
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but
 the
birth
rate
of
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in
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 the
USA
 in most years is higher than in
Chinain
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China in
the
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China
. At the beginning of the
period
 in 1920, the
birth
rate
for
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 the
USA
 was 11%, which was 1% higher than
China
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in China
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. In the next 15 years, there was a slight rise in the fertility
rate
 of
China
, reaching 15%.
In addition
, the year 1947 saw a significant descent to about 5% for both nations, at which point the
figures
 started growing, hitting a peak at 20% for
China
 and 15% for the US. Looking at the chart for more detail, after peaking out, the
birth
rate
of
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China
 fell sharply and hit the lowest point by 2000, with around just 2%. With the exception of the
USAof
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USA of
USA
, a steady drop was seen in
itsit’s
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its it’s
figures
, reaching approximately 7%
at the end
 of the
period
. It is noticeable that the
figures
 for America wereAmerica
was
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were
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 were always higher by about 5% for those in Japan from 1955 to 2000.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words period, birth, china, usa, figures, rate with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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