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The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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amount
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waste
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tonnes
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 throughout 15 years. It is evident,
whereas
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companies
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B
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 experienced
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 decrease
of
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producing
waste
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,
company
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 C shows
steady
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 increase. In detail,
company
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 C grows gradually from approximately 4, which was the nowhere like as much as for other
companies
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, to more than 9
tonnes
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 over the period in question.
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,
companies
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B
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 started with around 12 and a little less than 9 respectively. The quantity of
waste
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company
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 A fell to almost 8
tonnes
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15 years period. The
amount
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 of
waste
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company
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B
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 peaked in 2005 and reached nearly 11
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waste
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.
Then
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company
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B
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 experienced in steep fall to around 3
tonnes
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, which is the lowest level during the period in question .
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,
companies
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 demonstrate significant changes over the 15 years.
While
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companies
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 A and
B
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 declined their
amount
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waste
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company
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a
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dramatic growth and finished with the highest level,
although
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 it is not remarkably higher than the
amount
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waste
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 for
company
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 A in 2015.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, waste, tonnes, companies, b, company with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • significant changes
  • increase
  • decrease
  • waste production
  • period
  • compare
  • analyze
  • main features
  • highlight
  • decline
  • rise
  • steady
  • variations
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