Some people think the qualities a person needs to become successful in today’s world cannot be learned at a university or similar academic institution. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Universities are situations mainly for students to study academic
knowledge
and Use synonyms
people
can get a certification qualification if they graduate from Use synonyms
this
organization. Linking Words
People
have different views about whether or not a Use synonyms
person
gratitude from a Change noun form
person's
university
or similar academic institution can obtain successful factors in today’s world. Use synonyms
Although
I accept that there Linking Words
are
Correct subject-verb agreement
is
many
other Replace the quantifier
much
Use synonyms
knowledge
that we can not learn at a Correct quantifier usage
pieces of knowledge
university
Use synonyms
can
help us to be successful, I believe that it is essential for Correct pronoun usage
that can
people
to pursue a high degree.
There is a potential change for Use synonyms
people
who have abundant practical experience, which they can Use synonyms
should
learn in Remove a modal verb
apply
workshop
or society Fix the agreement mistake
workshops
instead
of learning at academic institutions. Salesmen, Linking Words
for example
, Linking Words
they
must have Correct pronoun usage
apply
a
problem-solving ability for customers and Correct article usage
apply
also
need to mediate the conflict between sellers and buyers. Both of them must be learned and equipped with by calculating experience in our there shop. If they can perfume Linking Words
excellent
in dealing Change the word
excellently
Change preposition
with emergency
emergency
, they are more likely outstanding from Fix the agreement mistake
emergencies
crowded
and Correct article usage
a crowded
be
noticed by their bosses. Unnecessary verb
apply
As a result
, they Linking Words
trend
to have more opportunities to get Correct your spelling
tend
a
better job Correct article usage
apply
prospect
and success in their workplace.
Fix the agreement mistake
prospects
However
, studying at a Linking Words
university
or similar academic institution can help Use synonyms
people
get Use synonyms
chance
to enter a higher level of Correct article usage
a chance
enterprises
. Most Fix the agreement mistake
enterprise
of
Change preposition
apply
employers
in big companies put value Add an article
the employers
to
Change preposition
on
people
with Use synonyms
a
high Correct article usage
apply
qualification
, because they think these Fix the agreement mistake
qualifications
people
have Use synonyms
a
better study ability and potential development than other employees without a degree. So that Correct article usage
apply
people
who gratitude from elite Use synonyms
school
can find a decent job easily and even be posted into a high position in Fix the agreement mistake
schools
workplace
.
Add an article
the workplace
In addition
, students learning at a Linking Words
university
can get plenty of academic Use synonyms
knowledge
that can be of great benefit to their Use synonyms
further
development. Students majoring in English, Linking Words
for example
, have comprehensive Linking Words
knowledge
Use synonyms
about
Change preposition
of
English
language and even foreign Correct article usage
the English
culture
. Fix the agreement mistake
cultures
This
academic Linking Words
knowledge
can help perfume better in international corporations because there are Use synonyms
on
Change preposition
apply
language
Add an article
the language
barrier
and a culture shock between them and foreigners from Fix the agreement mistake
barriers
other country
. So that, they are likely to get Change the wording
another country
other countries
a
Correct article usage
apply
further
study and know more about the world.
In conclusion, there are some Linking Words
successful
factors that we can not learn from Replace the word
success
educational
Add an article
an educational
the educational
institution
, but going to a Fix the agreement mistake
institutions
university
plays a crucial role in our Use synonyms
life
today.Replace the word
lives
Submitted by yuetongli98 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.
Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.
When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.
Linking words for giving examples:
- for example
- for instance
- to illustrate this
- to give a clear example
- such as
- namely
- to illustrate
- take, for example