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Some people think the qualities a person needs to become successful in today’s world cannot be learned at a university or similar academic institution. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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Universities are situations mainly for students to study academic
knowledge
 and
people
 can get a certification qualification if they graduate from
this
 organization.
People
 have different views about whether or not a
person
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 gratitude from a
university
 or similar academic institution can obtain successful factors in today’s world.
Although
 I accept that there
are
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many
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much
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 other
knowledge
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pieces of knowledge
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 that we can not learn at a
university
can
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that can
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 help us to be successful, I believe that it is essential for
people
 to pursue a high degree. There is a potential change for
people
 who have abundant practical experience, which they can
should
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learn in
workshop
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workshops
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 or society
instead
 of learning at academic institutions. Salesmen,
for example
,
they
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apply
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must have
a
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problem-solving ability for customers and
also
 need to mediate the conflict between sellers and buyers. Both of them must be learned and equipped with by calculating experience in our there shop. If they can perfume
excellent
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 in dealing
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emergency
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emergencies
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, they are more likely outstanding from
crowded
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 and
be
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noticed by their bosses.
As a result
, they
trend
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tend
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 to have more opportunities to get
a
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apply
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better job
prospect
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prospects
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 and success in their workplace.
However
, studying at a
university
 or similar academic institution can help
people
 get
chance
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a chance
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 to enter a higher level of
enterprises
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enterprise
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. Most
of
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employers
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the employers
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 in big companies put value
to
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on
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people
 with
a
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apply
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high
qualification
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qualifications
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, because they think these
people
 have
a
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apply
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better study ability and potential development than other employees without a degree. So that
people
 who gratitude from elite
school
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schools
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 can find a decent job easily and even be posted into a high position in
workplace
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the workplace
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.
In addition
, students learning at a
university
 can get plenty of academic
knowledge
 that can be of great benefit to their
further
 development. Students majoring in English,
for example
, have comprehensive
knowledge
about
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English
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the English
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 language and even foreign
culture
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cultures
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.
This
 academic
knowledge
 can help perfume better in international corporations because there are
on
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language
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the language
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barrier
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barriers
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 and a culture shock between them and foreigners from
other country
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another country
other countries
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. So that, they are likely to get
a
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apply
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further
 study and know more about the world. In conclusion, there are some
successful
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 factors that we can not learn from
educational
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an educational
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institution
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institutions
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, but going to a
university
 plays a crucial role in our
life
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lives
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 today.
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