The chart below shows the global sales of different kinds of digital games from 2000 to 2006.
The bar chart highlights data about the worldwide trade of various types of digital gambles between 2000 and 2006
Overall
, it can be seen from the graph that at the beginning there were two types of games
handheld and console whereas
at the end
of the ,
duration there were 4 different kinds of activities Remove the comma
apply
such
as mobile, online, handheld and console.
To begin
with, handheld games
began at 11, rising steadily during the first two years. Then
, it soared in 2001, going up gradually unless it rocketed in the final year. Mobile phone games
appeared at over 1 in 2002, but then
they rose considerably for the rest of the period. In the final, it took third place
being at 7. Online games
witnessed the same movement as mobile phone games
starting at over 1 in 2002, and shooting up for the rest of the period. However
, it outnumbered mobile phone games
being at 10 which is in second place
.
It’s clear that the only game which faced a downward trend is console games
. Console games
were in second place
getting at under 6, though they decreased gradually during the period. Subsequently
, it took the last
place
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