Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same thing and avoiding change. However, some people think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give opinions.
Some people argue that better to spend their lives doing the same thing and avoiding
change
. However
, some population
think that Fix the agreement mistake
populations
change
is always a good thing, In my opinion, I believe that change
is the right action to do depends
on the circumstances Wrong verb form
depending
which
we have in our life. Correct pronoun usage
apply
This
essay will elaborate both
perspectives of views.
On Change preposition
on both
one
hand, there are several reasons why society doesn’t agree to do different things. One
of the reasons is some family
feel lazy and scared Fix the agreement mistake
families
with
the new things Change preposition
of
on
their life. They prefer to accept their Change preposition
in
conditions
rather to
transform their old habits Remove the marker
apply
to
better Change preposition
into
one
. Correct pronoun usage
ones
For instance
, in Indonesia, due to
bad economic conditions
, some labours prefer to work with the minimum salary instead
of looking for better opportunities. They opt for this
choice because of their poor and limited condition, they feel enough to accept the situation and
Correct word choice
which
Wrong verb form
resulting
result
a few benefits for them. Add the preposition
inresult
fromresult
Therefore
, they feel it is better to do the same things and avoid some changes which lead to their conditions
being lower than before.
On the other hand
, one
of the reasons why people opt for changes in their activity because
transformations are needed for human beings in Add a missing verb
is because
this
modern world. They have targets in their life which forced them to move forward with new ideas or styles to improve their activity better. For example
, Android Corporation is one
of the private companies which always pushes their employees to give some new ideas for the development of the company. Thus
, it creates a good environment for them to not be afraid of the transformations because the adjustment is one
of the actions which lead them to better conditions
.
In conclusion, I believe it is better if some communities have some desire to change
as it will be a main tool to adapt to the rapid transformations in this
world. Otherwise
, some people should accept their conditions
because of the limitation of their activity.Submitted by adimk02 on
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