People nowadays prefer to interact online e g do shopping chat with friends rather than talking to other people face to face What are the reasons for this. Is this a positive or negative development?
In the modern
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people
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always to keep in touch with friends and relatives.
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people
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life
changes too often caused Use synonyms
by
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the invention
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new
devices or just the new features for existing ones. When smartphones and different social media were not existing, Change preposition
of new
people
communicated offline and spent a Use synonyms
lot
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in shopping centres, product shops and small boutiques. Use synonyms
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people
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everything Use synonyms
was
changed. Unnecessary verb
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many
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much
time
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for
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apply
the
buying new thing, Correct article usage
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for example
. Another reason underlies in the simple Linking Words
conveniency
of social media and other online services.
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convenience
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lot
of advantages, Use synonyms
although
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lot
of disadvantages as well. Use synonyms
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people
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lot
of Use synonyms
time
, which their, Use synonyms
for example
, can spend with their families. Linking Words
Moreover
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communication
it is nowhere like Add a comma
,communication
do
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stuffs
as without them. Change the wording
stuff
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pieces of stuff
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,childhood
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the whole
for
buying the products for the week, Change preposition
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while
now I just order the delivery of all these products.
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people
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adoptation
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adoption
for
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fast developed
technological world. Even though some problems can be caused by online communication, it is mostly positive development and it facilitates modern Add a hyphen
fast-developed
life
.Use synonyms
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