People nowadays prefer to interact online e g do shopping chat with friends rather than talking to other people face to face What are the reasons for this. Is this a positive or negative development?
In the modern
world
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,world
people
prefer to do a lot
of things such
as shopping and communicating with friends online. There are some reasons for these actions including technological progress and changes in modern life
. As for me, I think that it is a rather good trend,
because it gives Remove the comma
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a
possibility to make more chores and Correct article usage
the
in
the same Change preposition
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time
always to keep in touch with friends and relatives.
First of all, today people
's life
changes too often caused by
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the invention
invention
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inventing
new
devices or just the new features for existing ones. When smartphones and different social media were not existing, Change preposition
of new
people
communicated offline and spent a lot
of time
in shopping centres, product shops and small boutiques. However
, when these devices have
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people
's life
everything was
changed. Unnecessary verb
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People
have realised that they don't need anymore waste so many
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much
time
for
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the
buying new thing, Correct article usage
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for example
. Another reason underlies in the simple conveniency
of social media and other online services.
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convenience
Therefore
, this
development has a lot
of advantages, although
a lot
of disadvantages as well. To begin
, online interactions help people
to save a lot
of time
, which their, for example
, can spend with their families. Moreover
, without online services and communication
it is nowhere like Add a comma
,communication
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stuffs
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stuff
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For instance
, in my childhood
we spent almost Add a comma
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the whole
for
buying the products for the week, Change preposition
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while
now I just order the delivery of all these products.
To sum up
, it seems like online interacting
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people
's adoptation
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adoption
for
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fast developed
technological world. Even though some problems can be caused by online communication, it is mostly positive development and it facilitates modern Add a hyphen
fast-developed
life
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