You visited a hotel last week and left some items behind. Write a letter to the manager stating 1. Details of your stay 2. How important the items are to you 3. How you would want the items to the sent to you
Dear hotel manager,
My name is Joanne Wu. I
have
stayed in your hotel from Unnecessary verb
apply
2nd
of July to Correct article usage
the 2nd
6th
of July, and the number of my room is 63A. I left my mobile Correct article usage
the 6th
phone
in the room, and I am pretty sure I left it on the bed.
The mobile phone
means a lot to me, this
is because my mother used to have the mobile phone
for her daily use. She has taken plently
of pictures and Correct your spelling
plenty
save
Wrong verb form
saved
it
on her mobile. Correct pronoun usage
them
However
, she already passed away, and her mobile phone
is the only thing she has left to
me. Change preposition
for
Me
and my mother were very Change the pronoun
I
closed
, and I am very sad that I lost her mobile Replace the word
close
phone
. Therefore
, I am begging your hotel staffs
to find the mobile Fix the agreement mistake
staff
phone
for me.
If you find the mobile phone
, can you please send it to this
address: 6/39 Illawarra Street, Allawah, Sydney.
I am appreciated your help and look forward to finding the mobile Change the punctuation
?
phone
soon.
Thank you so much.
Kind regards,
Joanne WuSubmitted by chenny.wu on
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