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The flow chart below shows an automatic photo booth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The flow chart below shows an automatic photo booth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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Presented is the picture described as an automatic
photo
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booth
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 At first sight, it can be seen that the
booth
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 has two parts. We pay by coins and choose your wanted type of
photo
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 on the outside. After that, we can come to the photograph side. sit down and the
booth
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 will take
photos
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 for us. Before taking
photos
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, you need to pay the fees and choose the size of the
photos
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 first. It has two types of
photos
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 including 1 large format or 4 passport-sized
photos
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. You can
also
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 choose whether our
photos
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 have
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colour or only black and white. After completing the choice, you come in and prepare for
photo
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 taking. You can check our outfit again in order to have a nice picture. When you feel that it is okay, there is an adjustable stool for you to sit down and look straight at eye level. You must not forget to close the short curtain before taking
photos
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 to make sure that your
photos
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 will not be too bright.
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, you need to smile in friendly and wait for the light signal to flash after 3 seconds, the
booth
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 will take a beautiful
photo
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 for you and deliver it outside within 60 seconds.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words photo, booth, photos with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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