Some experts suggest people a method to solve the environmental problem is to increase the cost of fuels and all vehicles. To what extent do you agree with this point? and make comparisons where relevant.

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it is sometimes argued that experts suggest
people
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a method to solve the environmental problem is to increase the
cost
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of
fuels
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and all
vehicles
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,
while
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I disagree with
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idea . on the one hand , it is true that increasing the
cost
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of
fuels
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and all
vehicles
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has some advantages .
firstly
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, it can reduce car fumes if government increase the
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of
fuels
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and all
vehicles
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, because a few
people
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can afford to pay the
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of
fuels
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to drive their cars to go to work .
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it is beneficial for the environment,because fewer
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drive cars fewer fumes can be produced,
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it can solve pollution problems .
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, it good for
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healthy ,and reduce the number of
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who suffer from the breathing problems.
on the other hand
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, increasing the
cost
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of
fuels
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and all
vehicles
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has some advantages , but I think increasing the
cost
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of
fuels
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and all
vehicles
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also
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may cause some disadvantages.
firstly
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,it increases the financial burden on relevant industries, especially for the transport industries ,because the company
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more than before ,
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it may
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develop the price of products ,so that few
people
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want to buy them,and customers decrease the demand for products,
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company can make fewer profits which cause the decrease of the staff's salary,
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,it increases poverty.
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, it is inconvenient, because it can put pressure on public resources,
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, public transportation
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becomes more and more crowded ,increasing the number of workers taking buses and subways. in conclusion , I disagree with Some experts who suggest
people
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a method to solve the environmental problem is to increase the
cost
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of fuel and all
vehicles
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.
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