The table describes the change of people who went for international travel in different areas in 19901995 2000 and 2005(In millions).Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table describes the change of people who went for

international travel in different areas in 19901995 2000 and 2005(In millions).Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The table provides data on the
number
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of international travellers in different regions in four
years
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.
It is clear that
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Europe was extremely popular among
tourists
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in all the mentioned
years
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, the
number
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of
tourists
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in EU countries surged from 1995 to 2005 (280.2 and 400.2
million
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respectively). Asia and the Pacific region were in
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second place. The percentage of
tourists
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accounted for roughly 60
million
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people in 1995 and grew up to approximately 135.8 during the next 15
years
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. Probing
further
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, America was the second most visited region
at the end
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of the 20th century and reached a peak of its popularity in 2000, when the continent was visited by almost 120
million
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. The figure dipped to 113.2
million
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in five
years
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. Africa and the Middle East are not in demand ,
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however
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the
number
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of international travellers doubled during the given time period.
Overall
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, the
number
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of people, who travelled around the world increased roughly 1,5 times from 1990 to 2005. Europe remains the most visited region,
while
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Asia and the Pacific attract new
tourists
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every year.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, years, tourists, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
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