The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007
The graph gives information about how many people in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal produced carbon dioxide
emissions
between 1967 and 2007.
Overall
, since the beginning, Italy and Portugal’s
emissions
were increasing slightly
while
Sweden and the United Kingdom fell dramatically. In 1967, Sweden had started from 8
tons
and increased in 1977 to roughly 10
tons
of CO2
emissions
.
Then
, the
emissions
suddenly fell in 1987 to about 7
tons
and went down slowly to approximately 7
tons
in 2007.
Although
, from the first year, the United Kingdom citizen created more CO2, about 12
tons
sharply dropped all over the period.
On the other hand
, people in Portugal and Italy display that the emission growth began from the lower number
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1 ton and 4
tons
in 1967 and significantly increased over the year. After that, Italy reached a peak of above 8
tons
in 2007 and at the same time, Portugal followed in
the
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second place with around 5
tons
of
emissions
.
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