Write a letter to the manager of your local bus service. They have recently made some changes to the bus services which created inconveniences for you. In your letter, explain: •what are the changes •what are the problems you are facing •what part of the service would you like to change Write at least 150 words. You get 20 minutes to complete this task.

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to express my concern about the recent changes to the bus services in Willington Countryside and the related consequences. Previously, there were four bus stops on Waver Street conveniently located near essential areas
such
as schools, shops, and offices.
However
, with the addition of a fifth stop, the original stops have been relocated, making them less accessible.
As a result
, I now need to walk approximately 10 minutes to reach the nearest stop, which is inconvenient and time-consuming.
Additionally
, my son can no longer get off at the Buckingham stop directly across from his school, requiring me to accompany him, which is quite inconvenient.
Therefore
, I kindly request that you restore the previous stops and keep the new ones
at the end
, as it serve the newly built playground. I appreciate your attention to
this
matter and look forward to your prompt response. Yours faithfully, Abraham Streeter
Submitted by majid.ebadi on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single idea to enhance clarity.
Task Achievement
Provide more detailed specific examples to strengthen the task response.
Task Achievement
The letter maintains a polite and formal tone throughout, suitable for addressing a manager.
Coherence and Cohesion
The letter features a logical structure with clear paragraphs, enhancing readability.
Coherence and Cohesion
A proper greeting and closing are used, maintaining a respectful tone.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: