The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

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The bar chart above compares the percentages of city residents’ habits from five Australian

cities

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. The habits are buying and drinking

coffee

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and

tea

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product.

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, people enjoy drinking

coffee

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and

tea

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. It is

also

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shown that going to a cafe for

coffee

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tea

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in the

last

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four weeks was common in all

cities

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except Adelaide. In all

cities

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, people’s

behavior

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behaviour

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toward

coffee

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shows a pattern, most of them choose to go to a cafe

instead

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of buying fresh

coffee

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since fresh

coffee

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has been bought in all

cities

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only been bought less than 45%. For people who like to visit cafes, Melbourne, Hobart, and Sydney led the most visitors with a proportion above 60% compared to the two other

cities

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only below 55%. In conclusion, consuming

coffee

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tea

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become a trend in today’s society but most residents prefer to visit cafes

instead

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of purchasing fresh and instant

coffee

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Vocabulary: Replace the words cities, coffee, tea with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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4 paragraphs

151 words

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