The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
The bar chart above compares the percentages of city residents’ habits from five Australian
cities
. The habits are buying and drinking
coffee
and
tea
product.
Overall
, people enjoy drinking
coffee
and
tea
. It is
also
shown that going to a cafe for
coffee
or
tea
in the
last
four weeks was common in all
cities
except Adelaide. In all
cities
, people’s
behavior
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toward
coffee
shows a pattern, most of them choose to go to a cafe
instead
of buying fresh
coffee
since fresh
coffee
has been bought in all
cities
only been bought less than 45%. For people who like to visit cafes, Melbourne, Hobart, and Sydney led the most visitors with a proportion above 60% compared to the two other
cities
only below 55%. In conclusion, consuming
coffee
or
tea
become a trend in today’s society but most residents prefer to visit cafes
instead
of purchasing fresh and instant
coffee
.
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