The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
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The diagram explains the change of values in one country's professionals in 5 sectors between 2015 and 2016. The table graph describes of changing
percentages
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in comparison in one year with every department.
It is clear that
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petroleum
products
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and Engineering tools and textiles had gone up the number
percentages
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,
Whereas
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Gems and jewellery had declined. At
last
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, Agricultural
products
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slightly got higher of it.  First of all, focusing on increased quality of
products
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. Textiles were massively risen by 15.24% within a year, which is the most improvement in all sections. Engineering goods were the second highest, followed by 8.5%. Petroleum
products
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got 3% up. It seemed to these sectors warned great money, which was approximately 60 billion in both years.
On the other hand
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Gems and jewellery was lost by 5.18%.
Moreover
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, it was the only decreasing number of
percentages
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.
Although
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I can't really say Agricultural
products
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had increased by only 0.81%.
To sum up
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, petroleum
products
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and Engineering goods had warned of
percentages
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,
however
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, Textiles had improved dramatically in 2016.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentages, products with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • export value
  • trend analysis
  • anomalies
  • percentage change
  • sector analysis
  • global demand
  • domestic production
  • economic conditions
  • technological advancements
  • international regulations
  • economic growth
  • trade relations
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