IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 7

The bar chart shows the amount of foreign direct investment in India and China from 2014 to 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The bar chart shows the amount of foreign direct investment in India and China from 2014 to 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The chart illustrates the level of outside investment in the economies of
India
Use synonyms
 and
China
Use synonyms
 between 2014 and 2019.
Overall
Linking Words
, expenditure in
China
Use synonyms
 declined steadily throughout the period but fluctuated in
India
Use synonyms
. Despite
this
Linking Words
, the total amount of money that flowed into
China
Use synonyms
 was higher than in
India
Use synonyms
. The Chinese economy received just under 80
billion
Use synonyms
 in 2014, which fell to about 60
billion
Use synonyms
 in 2015 and 2016. After a slight decrease in 2017, there was a massive resurgence to a high point of more than 100
billion
Use synonyms
 in 2018 before receding to just over 40
billion
Use synonyms
 in 2019. In 2014, foreign outlays into
India
Use synonyms
's economy reached more than 30
billion
Use synonyms
,
then
Linking Words
 rose significantly to approximately 60
billion
Use synonyms
 in 2015 and 2016 before falling back to 2014 levels in 2017. In 2018, there was another dramatic increase to just below 60
billion
Use synonyms
, before returning to around 20
billion
Use synonyms
 in 2019. 2015 was the only year
India
Use synonyms
's levels of foreign investment exceeded
China
Use synonyms
's, with values of slightly over 60
billion
Use synonyms
 and slightly below 60
billion
Use synonyms
.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words india, china, billion with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 3 times.
▼
What to do next:
Look at other essays: