Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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debate

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a decade that art as a subject is equally important

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studying at school for

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development.

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, the other perception totally contradicts

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idea because it results in

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of focus.

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views in the following paragraphs. In a new developmental phase of a

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brought up where

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basic learning includes activities like arts and

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can be highly beneficial for

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cognitive growth,

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, research in China shows that

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students who can make

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,

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in handwork and paintings tend to get more excellence, the brain capacity grows differently by trying new ideas and innovation than the students that generally pursue only subjects that includes memorization.

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, it ultimately impacts child mental growth and

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them able to perform

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in various fields.

On the contrary

, being engaged in different activities would divert the concentration and resilience of a student from the subjects that require more time and dedication.

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, some courses like mathematics, science and chemistry need more attention and practice

consequently

, young students never find enough time to look for these creativities. Simultaneously balancing between these two different sides often causes a lot of stress so

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kids avoid

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confusion and focus on each side only.

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, it hinders and confines the thinking capacity to look out of the box. In conclusion, learning

art

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can nurture self-growth,

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the other view is that it can cost your time and energy which can easily impact focus.