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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Write at least 250 words. The breakthroughs in medical science are by far the most significant advances in world society over the last two centuries. Discuss this statement and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

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During the
last
 two decades,
medecine
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medicine
 was the most rapid evolution in world society.
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point, a lot of research has been done in different sectors to cure many pathologies.
This
 essay agrees that
this
 field has been a tremendous milestone in
humans
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 evolution. Discovering new methods to improve medical science is never enough to find solutions in order to save lives, the latter
are
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 always in development.
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,
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, it is impossible to deny the fact that medical science had seen a vast improvement in
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speciality
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. Thanks to
this
 latter, the quality of life and
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 of age increased, and
also
this
 development help people to live healthier.
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