In most countries, children wear uniforms to school. Some people argue that this is not a good idea. Discuss and give your own opinion.

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There are arguments spreading over
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society that studying
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is more essential rather than studying the native
languages
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. They (The local language) may be in danger of extinction if
people
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do not learn about it. In my opinion,
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need to learn
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, but at the same time, we need to keep the local
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.
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with, there is a benefit gained by us (dihilangkan saja, pemborosan kata, terus passive sentence itu pronoun-nya sudah jelas, jadi gak perlu pakai "by us" lagi) by learning
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. The main one is that it will be easier for
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to get a
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job in the future. It is because there are a lot of occupations which need (ganti dengan
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lainnya)
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requirements.
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, managerial or supervisory jobs often require job candidates to speak
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well.
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, the ones who get accepted are mainly
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good
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speakers. It is
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a
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general knowledge that when we are accepted in
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kind of position, the income is definitely far different from the lower position. It is because the higher position jobs we get, the more salary we obtain.
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, our welfare rate increases.
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, (
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itu biasanya antar
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paragraph
, kalau mau beda
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paragraph
para graf
pakai
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,
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, etc.)
besides
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having a great
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at
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, we have to preserve our local
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since they are our national identity. There are various possible actions that could be taken in order to tackle
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issue.
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the government should implement the regulations that each school must make native
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as
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their compulsory course since the
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can be easier to master if there is a teacher who teaches us (langsung aja "the students") about it.
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,
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is the first teacher of each child so every family needs to teach their children to be used to speaking their local
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. It is because being good in a language needs a lot of practice, so our home is definitely the suitable place to do that since it is the place lived by our closest ones. By combining those remedies, we can preserve local
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. In conclusion,
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getting
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at
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the
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language is necessary for
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, we
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need to protect our local
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by making it a mandatory lesson in schools and teaching it in our own
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.
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