In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Nowadays internet has become so affordable and available to everyone regardless of their location and income.
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, everything is available online. All the basic and even complex human information is available
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us with just
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click away. Some
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claim that because of
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advancement, no
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will show interest in buying printed books and newspapers.
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there are some other who disagree
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approach, I partially believe and agree
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this
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statement. To start with Reading books online saves a lot of time and it is
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our phones and which is not something that should be carried all the time,
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can go through them whenever he wants.
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more big advantage of internet buffering is we can be up to date about the incidents and information that are happening around the world.
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is a cricket match
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going live
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midnight and
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goes through the next day,
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the newspaper company will not take a risk of stopping the publications until the match is finished,
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they will just post the details from their
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printing. But,
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we can stream those same updates live via
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the cricket
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app as they
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on refreshing the main screen
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every minute. Even though there are
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fabulous and convenient insights from
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study, still there are
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drawbacks to
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say that
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we get everything we want from
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computer, studying from
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does not give that; feel, impact and
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enthusiasm
. To support
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, let's say there is a person who wants to prepare for competitive exams and he has
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migraine
syndrome which causes him to stay in front of the computer
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more than
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a few
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hours a day. In
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just able to cope
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study and fail the exam but
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affects his career and thereby affects his mental stability
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,
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is
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of the
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gracious
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to deal with.
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my argument, internet consumption is spiralling
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which results in the
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availability of books and papers online, where
people
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can gain knowledge easily without being paid
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. Though
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phenomenon
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its own advantages and disadvantages there are still concerns in
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which
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in mixed
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opinions about
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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