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The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came
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The table showed the origin of the police
budget
 from 2017 to 2018, and the chart indicated how their
budget
 was distributed to salaries, technology, buildings and transport in the same term.
Overall
, people can see that there were not too many differences between 2017 and 2018, and all aspects which were mentioned
by
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 the graphs were stable. If we look at the police
budget
,
national
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the national
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 government significantly contributed to one, around 175.5 and slightly increased to 177.8 .
Otherwise
, local taxes was the second highest contributor
due to
 contributing 91.2 and 102.3 . Other sources
also
 played an important part in their source
while
 only
supplied
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 about 38.25,
hence
 police
budget
 can totally
earned
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upper
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 300 . With regard to 3 fields
which
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 money need to spend
on
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apply
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, salaries had the largest percentage
which
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about 75% and minimally declined to 69% in 2018 .
However
, technology
were
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 only invested 8% of the
budget
 and went up to 14% in the next year, buildings and transport were stay constant at 17% in 2 periods.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words budget with synonyms.
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