The bar chart illustrates the percentage of how parents in a country spent time taking care of their children in the evening in 2022. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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time
for
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parents
spent their time
to take care of their children
at night in 2022. The majority of tasks were done by mother
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the mother
In contrast
, fathers sometimes did house choures
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chores
such
as helping with housework or preparing for bed, and almost never dresses their children
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parents
didn’t do it often. Following that, the percentage of time
mothers spent helping their children
with homework was five times higher than that of fathers. Also
, both male and female parents
took a very long time
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time
, was the most popular activity for their parents
to take care of their kids. Finally
, the percentage of time
spent playing games and preparing for bed
made by their male Add an article
a bed
parents
was around 5 percent
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per cent
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