The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The bar chart compares the ten highest-ranked countries in terms of the amount of
electricity
produced and consumed in 2014.
It is clear that
in 2014 China was by far the largest producer of electricity
and also
the largest consumer of electricity
, while
the Republic of Korea had the lowest of all ten countries for both amounts.
In 2014, China produced around 5,400 billion
kWh
of electricity
and used almost the same amount, ranking first. The United States followed in second place with about 400 billion
kWh
of production and 390 billion
kWh
of consumption. By contrast
, the Republic of Korea's production capacity and electricity
demand is approximately less than 10 per cent of those of China.
The figures for Russia and Japan were more or less than 100 billion
kWh
. It is also
worth noting that Germany is the only one of these ten countries whose domestic electricity
consumption (582.5 billion
kWh
) exceeds its production (526.6 billion
kWh
).Submitted by xiexue1223 on
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