In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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The development in technology has led some businesses to generate new ideas

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advertisement. In order to gain more popularity many businesses make people think that their

product

is new

some how

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. There are multiple reasons for

this

method of advertising. Individuals, nowadays, are more aware of the

product

, they are using.

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, shampoos are being used in everyday routine and they know which shampoo contains ingredients, like sulfur and other chemicals and how it has a bad

affect

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on hair. To cope

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with

this

problem shampoo companies are now making sulfate-free shampoos. On the second hand, companies emphasise more on new products

because

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they need to give a reason to people to change their

exsisting

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existing

product

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products

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if someone is using a particular

skin care

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routine, he needs a significant reason to switch to a new

skin care

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product

, which is more

benefitial

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beneficial

for his skin. Organisations need to put in more effort to make their

product

different from

others'

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. I believe it is a positive way of

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. It brings out

creativity

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in small businesses and allows them to grow.

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, it adds

the

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variety of products and

give

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more options to individuals, to buy something different. Companies

also

benefit because everyone is trying to find a

product

that is

cost friendly

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and somehow different from ordinary. In a developing world, there are

mutiple

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multiple

options to explore new ways of advertisement. Even though better ways are still immerging, adding something new to a

product

never gets old.

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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