You have just finished your master’s degree and need to leave your current part-time job to search for full-time employment. Write a letter to your current employer. In your letter • explain why you will not pursue a full-time job in his/her company • say why you’ve enjoyed working for him/her • tell him/her how much longer you will continue to work for him/her.

Dear Sir or Madam, Hope
this
letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. By the way, my name is Joziba Maxmasoliyeva. I have recently finished my masterʼs degree .
For
this
reason,
l
searched a part-time job in our country. After that,
l
saw your office on the internet. You advertised your office ads on the Internet.
Then
l
liked your facilities during the work .
That is
why,
l
am writing
this
letter to request an occupation.Yet , I disagreed full- time job . Because
l
have some problems at home .
That is
to say,
l
have to take care of my grandmother .
For
this
reason,
l
may not work .
In addition
,
l
will continue to work for about 2 years . Because
l
will move another country after 2 years in America for travel . If you need any other details, please feel free to write to me I would certainly be interested in hearing from you soon. Thank you for your time and consideration. Yours faithfully, Joziba Maxmasoliyeva.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • thirdly
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  • moreover
  • also
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  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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