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You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company. Write to the airline and • explain what happened • describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it • find out what they are going to do about it

#plane #week #suitcase #airline #company
Dear Sir I am writing
this
 letter to you about my lost travelling suitcase because I did not hear anything till now from the airline XYZ Toronto Pearson. As I was travelling by Westjet from Vancouver Airport to Toronto on March 30, 2022. I was carrying a suitcase
along with
 one laptop bag but I need to check in my carry sack because I was carrying certain liquids in that. I was supposed to pay $45 extra at a point in time. I love bright colours so, my bag was royal blue in colour with beautiful birds on its surface
along with
 a white handle on its top
as well as
 on the right-hand side. Actually, the briefcase contains some important documents
such
 as my birth certificate and my work permit .
Therefore
,
this
 case means a lot to me.
Furthermore
, I
also
 have certain expensive cosmetic products
as well as
 costly clothes.
Although
,
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 I already tried sending a letter earlier, I did not get any fruitful response. Again, I am giving
this
 letter to you so that I should be able to find my belonging as soon as possible just
,
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 because it includes my identity in it. I am waiting for your response. Yours Sincerely Navneet Kaur

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • flight itinerary
  • baggage claim
  • missing luggage
  • distinguishing features
  • high-value items
  • sentimental value
  • compensation policy
  • alternative measures
  • regular updates
  • trace the case
  • inquire
  • express dissatisfaction
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