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Some people believe that social media sites, such as Facebook or Twitter, have a negative impact on young people and their ability to form personal relationships. Others believe that these sites bring people together in a beneficial way.

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Modren time makes
people
's life easy to communicate with each other with the help of social
sites
.
While
 it is agreed by some communities that all those
sites
 put a bad impact on the personal relationships of every and each individual ,
However
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,However
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 others have an opposing opinion. All the
sites
 that are used to send messages or make calls are having a negative impact on
people
's life.
People
 are focusing more on the individual whom they meet on social
sites
 and have never seen in person.
In addition
, they do not give attention to the person whom they meet all day.
As a result
, relationships get broken. Often
people
 put negative stories or comments on social
sites
 that do brainwash other
people
.
In other words
, it can be often seen that folk on social
sites
 keep barking at each other and judging them without any reason.
For example
, Sidhu
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moose wall
moosewala
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Moosewala
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 was not having any issues with babu man but
people
 kept putting comments on each other stories they start to fight In conclusion, these
sites
 have a bad impact on the younger community rather than giving them an opportunity to communicate with other
people
.
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