The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West park Secondary School since its construction in 1950. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West park Secondary School since its construction in 1950.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams illustrate what changed in the construction of the West
park
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Park
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Secondary
School
from 1950 until 2010.
Overall
, we can see that the most significant change from 1950 to 2010 was the development of the
car
park
and the new
block
that was added to the
school
,
whereas
the extinction of the houses and the farmland. In 1980, we can see that there was a need for
school
expansion, more specifically an additional
block
was added to the main building of the
school
and it is called Science
block
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Block
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, which remained the same
also
in 2010. To the west of the
school
in 1950 there were houses but in 1980 they were replaced by the science
block
and a small
car
park
.
Moreover
, a
sport
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sports
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field was added to the place of
the
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farmland. In 2010, there was a need for a bigger
car
park
so the
car
park
expanded to the sports field and the
last
one was relocated to the east taking a small part of the playground.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words park, school, car, block with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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