Write about the following topic. Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Workers in different sectors are expected to meet certain criteria. Some
employees
are required to abide by a strict dress code where
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whereas
companies
care about the worker's productivity. It is true that companies
should focus on the employee's work, yet it is very important to look presentable. On one hand, an employee's comfort should be prioritized. Some people
feel better-accomplishing
tasks in comfortable clothes rather than formal attire. In fact, some Correct your spelling
better about accomplishing
companies
allow their employees
to wear sweatpants around the office. For instance
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is a
company
that created a friendly environment for its workers. The company
has attracted a lot of employees
all around the world for its flexibility that
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On the other hand
, a person's appearance always reflects on the environment they are in. A company
's dress code is an extension of their
identity, and it is always expected of Correct pronoun usage
its
people
working for a specific organization to meet these requirements. When walking into a big cooperate company
you will see all the employees
dressed in formal attire. Indeed, it has been proven that psychologically a person's appearance affect
how they are perceived by others, especially in a work environment. Some Change the verb form
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companies
even ask their employees
to cover up any tattoos or piercings, as it will not give a good impression for
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to
people
they will work with. In conclusion, although
there is no correlation between a person's attire and productivity, I still believe that maintaining a presentable appearance is very important to gain people
's respect.Submitted by musallamarwa on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite