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The given pictures illustrate how a cinema has changed during the period from 1980 to these days.

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The graph shows
prevalent
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 purposes of
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 for Americans
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 the pie chart illustrates key problems related to the
traveling
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 public in the US in 2009.
Overall
, most people in the US
traveled
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 to and from work, and
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the traveling
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traveling
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 cost was the biggest concern
while
traveling
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 in public in the US in 2009. Regarding the bar graph, the percentage of US citizens commuting to and from work came first with nearly
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half( 49%)
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 the figure for seeing friends or relatives came
last
 with only 6%.
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, there was
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considerable
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 difference between the figures for private reasons and shopping, at 19% and 16% respectively. Only 10% of US citizens
traveled
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 for advertisement purposes. As can be seen from the pie chart, the price of travel ranked first with 36%, followed by safety concerns
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 19% and aggressive drivers
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 17%.
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, the portion of highway congestion was nearly two times higher than that of access to public transport, with 14% and 8% in turn. Space of pedestrians was the least prevalent concern accounting for only 6%.
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