You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The graph displays the
popuplation
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population
in different nations in 2003,
along with
it, the prediction regarding future
population
in 2025 and 2050 respectively.
Overall
, the
population
in the most of nations indicated an upward trend, in which Indonesia accounted for the largest proportion, compared to Argentina which contains the least
population
.
On the other hand
, Italy is the only region
that is
expected to lose the number of residents in the future. In 2003, Indonesia displayed the largest
population
at 238
million
, which will keep growing in the next 47 years and reach 312
million
by 2050. The
population
of Argentina displayed the least figure at 34
million
in 2003,
which
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and
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the number
expected
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is expected
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to experience a surge in the following years until hit 62
million
by 2050.
On the other hand
, the
population
of Italy, which was the second largest group in 2003 at 54
million
, will undergo a drastic drop to 45
million
by 2050. As for the
population
of the Republic of Korea, the number was 48
million
in 2003.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • projected figures
  • population growth
  • decline
  • initial population
  • highlight
  • differences
  • compare
  • expected changes
  • significant increases
  • significant decreases
  • entire period
  • contributing factors
  • birth rates
  • immigration
  • economic conditions
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