It has been often said when an individual behaves in anti-social way, society in general is to blame. Why causes this behaviour? Who is responsible for dealing with it?

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tend to be aggressive because of
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society
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. I believe that there are other factors that can explain why
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or organizations are responsible in terms of addressing
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issues
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. The first cause has to be with
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environment.
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is because if
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of
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do not pay enough attention to their
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and give punishments for even little mistakes, it is automatic for
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to behave in
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way
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when they become older enough to play a role in
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society
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. Since their
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shaped
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and it is almost impossible
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them to alter their
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of thinking, leading to treating other
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in a rude
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. Another reason is connected with
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’s failed attempts, as
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tend to assign blame
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other factors when they can not attain their goals. In
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, they might feel frustrated and
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not care about others, leading to acting against social norms. As they think
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society
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or surroundings as
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their failure, they do not want to obey the social rules and show respect to other familiar
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may be common among all
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, as they never try to develop
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behavior
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. To fight against these problems,
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, first of
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should take
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. For one,
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should learn how to interact with
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and how
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in
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front of their
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children
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, seeing as
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tend to replicate what they see. When
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teach good habits to their
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instead
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of fighting with their couples all day belong or being rude towards their
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, they can ensure that their
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becomes
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person
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society
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. Apart from that,
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should teach their
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sense
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of resistance towards
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. In
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,
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may be ready
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when they start something and they tend not to put blame on others.
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but not least, the government have to establish some measures, that can constrain
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’s exposure to bad environment during their developing period. In conclusion, there are some factors which contribute to the creation of anti-social
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, yet some effective steps can be taken to solve
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