The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The table compares and contrasts the
population
rates of Argentina, Indonesia , Italy and the Republic of Korea, during the
year
2003 ,and it
also
forcasted
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forecasted
mortality ratios'
of
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2025 and 2050 in these nations.
Overall
, Indonesia had the highest
population
rates compared to
other
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three nations , and it is
also
predicted that it can still continue to grow in the upcoming years.
Whereas
, Italy had the lowest , and it will continue the same trend in the upcoming time periods.
To begin
with, 238
million
population
figures were accounted on Indonesia in the initial
year
and it is predicted that it will have a 74
million
increase in
their
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mortality rates in 2050 .
Whereas
,
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the Republic of Korea was the second most populated nation compared to Argentina and Italy , and it made up 48
million
in 2003 ,and the data shows that it will remain the same in 2025 and 2050 ( 52
million
) . Surprisingly , Argentina had the lowest
population
ratio in 2003 .
However
, it is projected that it will report a dramatic surge in their mortality ratios' and should reach 62
million
in 2050 .
While
, Italy was the second most populated nation in
the
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2003 , and it recorded 54
million
in that
year
.
By contrast
, the information illustrates that it will have a drastic fall in their
population
, and it might reach 45
million
in the
last
year
.
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