Parents of obese children shouldbe punished for making them fat. Do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that obesity is increasingly becoming a major concern in

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society. There is a belief that guardians of

such

children should receive punishment for not taking

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care. In

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essay, I will explain why I disagree with

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opinion and support my view with examples.

Firstly

, adolescents are said to be emotional because of their low maturity levels. Because of

this

, parents have to treat them with extreme care and affection. If they force their opinions on them,

then

there is a possibility of them becoming stubborn and ill-mannered.

For instance

, we often see that children get what they want by either crying or refusing to do what their guardians want.

In addition

, if they continue to scold or disregard their requests on a regular basis,

then

this

can

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affect their relationship in various ways.

Hence

, ultimately they have to give in to their children's demands.

Secondly

, genetics

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plays an essential role in the fatness of a child. Some are faced with

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disease because it is often considered

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a hereditary issue.

For example

, research conducted by BBC revealed that around 40% of families in the US suffer from

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problems including obesity.

Furthermore

, some medical conditions like thyroid which affects the hormones can

also

lead to these issues. In conclusion, I believe, there are several reasons behind adolescents gaining weight as it can be because of family inheritance or a few medical conditions and it would be unjust and unfair to punish the parents just because their child is fat.