Most career choices demand vocational skills or specialist knowledge. However, despite this, most schools still teach academic subjects such as history or social studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

These days, the reception of civilians about their health is becoming better and they always want to find a place where they and their

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can relish a healthy

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. Whether residents should live in rural or urban

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in order to own a healthy

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remains a controversial topic. From my perspective, both arguments are reasonable to a certain extent, but I am still in favour of the latter viewpoint. I will discuss my preference in the following paragraphs. On the one hand, the advocates of the first standpoint have their rational grounds.

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houses in the countryside are often spacious and are surrounded by a significant number of green trees. To elaborate, thanks to low population density, civilians are able to possess a large house with a garden,

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it is impossible in urban

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if they are not extremely wealthy.

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why doctors often recommend individuals who suffer from respiratory disease live in the countryside.

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road traffic in the rural

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is less jammed and there are few industrial

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there.

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many researchers, environmental pollution from traffic and industrial zones is the leading factor which leads to lethal diseases

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as cancer. Fortunately, Hanoi, the majestic capital of Vietnam, is where there are the most cancer patients in Viẹtnam,

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, the above arguments are insufficient to overshadow the merits of the second viewpoint. First and foremost, residents in metropolises are able to easily approach modern medical care. To be specific, the best doctors and advanced medical programs only appear in the metropolis where citizens can afford them.

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, they can easily buy functional or imported foods which are very good for health.

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, there are more and more policies and programs to improve the quality of

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in the

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. In fact, the Vietnamese authority is planning to move industrial zones outside of urban

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and renovate those

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into parks.

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will help lessen the population pressure on the

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and citizens will relish a better

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. In conclusion, it is underlined that spacious and green habitats and few industrial

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and vehicles bring a healthy

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for residents in rural

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, I am still in favour of the second viewpoint because of the medical care and the improvement in the quality of

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in the

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