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The table below shows how patients evaluated differnet services at three health centres.

The table below shows how patients evaluated differnet services at three health centres.
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The table compares and contrasts patient
ratings
 for five different
services
 in three various
health
 centres .
Overall
 , most patients recommended the
services
 provided by Peveril
health
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Health
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Centre
 as more satisfying.
Whereas
, the least rating was given
for
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 Kingston
centre
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Centre
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.
To begin
 with, most people believe the Peveril
centre
as
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is
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 the best
health
care
centre
 with
a
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an
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overall
 rating of 8.5 , and the Highest satisfying rating was given for Booking appointments and responses to concerns, and it recorded 9.1 and 9.6
ratings
 respectively.
While
,
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other
services
 like doctors'
services
 and
care
 for children reported 8.7 and 7.6 satisfaction ratios ' .
Whereas
, the least rating in the
centre
 was provided to the pharmacy with a 6.3 rating. Meanwhile , the March Bank
centre
 accounted second most satisfying
service
centre
 among the patients and data illustrates that doctors'
service
 was the best
service
 in the institutions , with
an
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8.4
ratings
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rating
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.
While
 , 7.8 and 7.3
rating
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ratings
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 were given for Booking appointments and
care
 of children , and 6.5 stars were provided to respond to concerns.
Whereas
 , the lowest rating was for pharmacy , which was 5.8 .
Lingston
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Kingston
Livingston
Centre
 was the less satisfying
health
centre
 compared to the other three centres , and it accounted
overall
 rating of 5.8 only .
Moreover
 , doctors'
services
was
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 the most popular
service
 in
lingston
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Kingston
Livingston
Arlington
centre
 , with
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an
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8.0 rating, and a 6.3 satisfaction value was given for the
care
 of children .
However
 , other
services
 like booking appointments , pharmacy and response to concern only constituted below 5
ratings
 respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall, whereas, while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words ratings, services, health, centre, care, service with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 3 times.
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