The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given table illustrates three pieces of information about the six different cities' underground
railway
systems; the date opened, the Use synonyms
length
of Use synonyms
Use synonyms
Correct article usage
the railways'
railways'
route, and the number of passengers every year.
Taking a closer look at the table, one can see that the underground Change noun form
railway's
railways
in London were opened in 1863, which was the first open among given cities. After it, the Use synonyms
railway
systems in Paris Use synonyms
were
started to operate in 1900, followed by Tokyo, Washington DC, Unnecessary verb
apply
Kyoto
, and Use synonyms
Los
Use synonyms
Angeles
. Use synonyms
In addition
, those facilities in London had the longest route of 394 Linking Words
km
, approximately twice longer than the Use synonyms
railways
in Paris, 199 Use synonyms
km
. The Use synonyms
railways
in Tokyo had the third longest Use synonyms
length
of 155 Use synonyms
km
, followed by Washington DC, Use synonyms
Los
Use synonyms
Angeles
, and Use synonyms
Kyoto
.
Use synonyms
However
, the Linking Words
railway
users had the largest number Use synonyms
of
1927 in Tokyo. The second largest figure was 1191 in Paris. Even though the Change preposition
in
railways
in London held the first and had the longest Use synonyms
length
, only 775 people used that facility. Use synonyms
Moreover
, Linking Words
while
the Linking Words
length
of Use synonyms
railway
systems in Use synonyms
Los
Use synonyms
Angeles
(28 Use synonyms
km
) almost doubled that in Use synonyms
Kyoto
(11 Use synonyms
km
), the numbers of passengers were similar between Use synonyms
Kyoto
and Use synonyms
Los
Use synonyms
Angeles
, 45 and 50, respectively.
Use synonyms
Overall
, it is true that the Linking Words
length
of the route did not guarantee the number of users.Use synonyms
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