The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about energy consumption in the USA since 1980, with projections until 2030.

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The line graph illustrates the changes in different types of energy consumed in the USA over 50 years from 1980 to 2008

together with

the predicted to 2030.

Overall

, the consumption of five fuels shows a general upward trend during 50 years, except

hydropower

, which will remain the same in 2030 compared to 1980. Petrol and oil are the major energy sources since 1980

while

hydropower

will be the least important fuel in the future. The major fuels were petrol and oil, natural

gas

, and coal in 1980, which were approximately consumed 16 quadrillion

units

, 20 quadrillion

units

and 35 quadrillion

units

respectively. Petrol and oil show the most sharply increase trend, which will rise by about 13

units

to reach 48

units

While

coal and natural

gas

grow quite slowly and intersect many times. At the beginning of the record, coal was slightly higher than natural

gas

for around 4

units

. But after the

last

time intersection in 2013, coal will take over natural

gas

reaching 30

units

In contrast

, the trend of nuclear, solar/wind, and

hydropower

are unobvious. Nuclear and solar/wind will slightly climb within 5

units

expecting to about 4 and 7

units

in 2030.

However

, the consumption of

hydropower

will be basically unchanged in 50 years, which will

finally

become the least-used fuel.

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The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about energy consumption in the USA since 1980, with projections until 2030.

In many large cities, people waste hours of their time everyday because of traffic congestion on the roads. What are the causes. what solutions can you suggest.

In some countries, more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in.

Very few schoolchildren learn about the value of money and how to look after it, yet this is a critical life skill that should be taught as part of the school curriculum. Do you agree or disagree?

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?