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Do you think the advantages of taking risk outweigh disadvantages?

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Taking
risk
 in
lives
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 either professional or personal are important. Risks are compulsory to grow, without availing opportunities we lose a chance that, perhaps, will never come back. There is no proper
time
 to start your business,
one
 has to take a step in form of
risk
 which mostly comes out to be good. ,
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 sometimes things look bad before but when you indulge in them you come to know you were worried without any reason. Even Mathematics start from zero .Same with our
lives
 risks take us to the glory which we cannot be imagined. Professionals have expertise in their field with well-stable
lives
. But if they think they should give chance to themselves to explore better. They can switch from
one
 firm to other.
Risk
 is involved in switching but it turns out to be good in form of learning, salary and environment. Shifting between companies require lots of courage but when
one
 has done it once,
one
 finds it good. Same as in the case of personal
lives
, we change the place of our living to settle ourselves better. For
this
 ,
the
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purpose we sell our beautiful home
to begin
 new trade. Selling out house makes us without a roof but at the same
time
 with hard ,work we can set up our business which allows us to earn more money to buy a luxurious house than we are having before.
On the other hand
, there are lots of drawbacks to having risks. Buying property in a distant place with the hope that it will increase
one
 day involves
risk
 .If it does not rise in
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price of it else it becomes less expensive than we have paid for it. It makes us financially unstable. We have to suffer. Moving from
one
 organization to other takes a lot of courage. We cannot adapt to new places. It makes us more disturbed, left us mentally unsatisfied and curbs our mental health. For more ,money we involve ourselves in strange situations which can not be recovered. In conclusion, I believe
one
’s life is full of ups and downs
therefore
 we name it live. It never runs smoothly. It is better to take chances
instead
 of regretting them afterwards.
Although
risk
 involves profit and loss both at the same
time
 but at least you pick up your opportunity for the best. Sometimes it goes bad and at the same
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 it can make you so much strength that you have no need to worry for your whole life. On contrary, if we invest knowing that the market will crash in any case. These types of opportunities will not only crush your resources but
also
 leave you with lots of stress.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • risk-taking
  • innovation
  • calculated risks
  • impulsive decisions
  • risk assessment
  • psychological aspects
  • emotional rewards
  • fear of failure
  • cultural attitudes
  • managing risks
  • potential benefits
  • personal growth
  • overcoming fear
  • significant discoveries
  • advancements
  • informed decisions
  • negative consequences
  • learning from failures
  • setbacks
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