You have just read an article in a national newspaper claiming that town centres in your country all look very similar. You don’t fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter, say which point in the article do you agree with? Explain ways your town centre differs from most other town centres offer to give a guided tour of your town to the article’s writer.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I would like to inform you that I have read an article in your prestigious newspaper which was posted on Tuesday 6th March regarding our country that our all towns are familiar to each other. I partially agree with

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opinion. First of all, it is hard to deny that the structure and design of the towns are mostly the same.

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, public facilities in undeveloped cities are quite poor with no advantages through which people had to suffer for

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, our town has changed dramatically in the

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decade. As, our town facilitates individuals with a variety of public transportation , hospitals , and medical and business school.

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, there is a number of parks, restaurants and recreational centres have opened.

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, it has increased in the more employment opportunities with lots of advantages to society. I would love to invite you to our city and give you a town tour to provide detailed knowledge and experience of it . Looking forward to welcoming you whenever you are ready to come. Yours Faithfully, Ali

alishadhunna2Fri Apr 07 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

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8 paragraphs

186 words

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