The graph below shows the number ofshops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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the graph shows an inverse relationship

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between

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of closures and openings

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of shop

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shop

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shops

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. The growth rate remains unclear and appears to have no patterns but the

number

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of closures

shop

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shops

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execeed

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exceeds

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of opening

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the majority

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of the time and

at the end

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of the

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which is 2018, both closures and openings have a lower

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than at the beginning of the

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which is 2011. It

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showed at 2011

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a higher

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opening

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openings

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than

closure

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closures

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but in 2018

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the opposite. Another major contrast

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of

closure

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and

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shop

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shops

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is the

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difference

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where the opening start is high which is 5,500 but for

closure

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it’s low which is about 1,100. One notable similarity is that most of the time they both have a gradual increase or

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on most of the

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but in

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year

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like

2015

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in 2015

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where one of them is

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a gradual

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decrease

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, and the other one is a steady

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. Throughout 2011- 2014 and 2016-

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,2018

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there’s been a gradual increase or

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but during 2014-2016 there’s a steep

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and increase showing an anomaly which either happen

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irrelevant data possibly by human error or a major world event

such

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as the Corona pandemic

cauisng

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causing

numerous shops to close.