The chart below shows three different crimes and the number of cases committed in 1970 and 2005 in England and Wales. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graph gives information about three

crimes

committed namely,

car

theft

, house burglary, and

street

robbery in England and

wales

Correct your spelling

Wales

show examples

for the

years

1970 to 2005.

Overall

car

theft

was the most committed crime in both cities; meanwhile, there were almost no

street

robberies for the majority of the period. As can be seen from the graph,

car

theft

made up the biggest percentage of

crimes

, starting with 0.4 million in 1970.

This

was followed by a steady increase, where it reached double the amount it previously was in 1980, and after 15

years

hitting its peak of 1.6 million before dipping in 2005.

On the other hand

, house burglary was at 0.2 in 1970,

then

slightly increased for ten

years

and displayed minor variations until it decreased.

In contrast

street

robbery was less popular in England and

wales

Correct your spelling

Wales

show examples

compared to

car

Add an article

a car

show examples

theft

and house burglary; with zero records of any

crimes

committed for the

years

1970 to 1990.

However

street

crimes

gradually began to rise, and in 2000

Correct pronoun usage

they

show examples

stood at 0.2 million remaining unchanged.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words crimes, car, theft, street, years with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.

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