The chart below shows the percentage of the population in the UK who consumed the recommended daily amount of fruit and vegetables in 2002, 2006 and 2010.

The chart below shows the percentage of the population in the UK who consumed the recommended daily amount of fruit and vegetables in 2002, 2006 and 2010.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of
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UK residents who consume the recommended quantity of produce per day in 2002, 2006, and 2010.
Overall
, it can be seen that there is an identical trend during the 3 recorded periods.
Additionally
, the highest percentage of fruits and vegetables
consumed
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by women,
while
the lowest figure belongs to children. From the graph, 22% of men consumed recommended proportion of plant food in 2002,
while
for women
this
figure made up 25%. In 2002, the percentage of consumption for both males and females increased significantly to 28% and 32%, respectively. After 4 years, these statistics moderately dropped, men's consumption of produce fell to 24%,
while
for women
this
figure constituted
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27%. Precisely, the amount of
the
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UK children consuming fruits and vegetables per day made up half (11%)
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of men in 2002.
Then
, in 2006, the proportion of these statistics for younger grew to 16% which was a peak in the recorded periods.
However
, it decreased by 2% in 2010.
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