The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
diagram illustrates the life cycle of Correct article usage
the spieces
spieces
of Correct your spelling
species
a
large fish called the Correct article usage
apply
salmon
.There are three main stages in the life cycle , beginning with salmon
eggs and ending with adult salmon
.
Overall
, Salmon
have an average lifespan of 9 years.First,
Salmon
eggs are born by the mother salmon
fish in an upper river next to a lot of small stones and reeds. Approx of 5 to 6 months,fry which measures 3 to 8 centimetres. The fry then
swims to lower
river and fast flowing .After growing up and feeding there for about 4 years the fry has become Add an article
the lower
to
the smolt ,they reach 12 to 15 centimetres. After that, they swim to the open sea,where they grow up to adult Change preposition
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salmon
which 70
to 76 centimetres. The adult Add a missing verb
are 70
salmon
spend 5 years in the ocean and then
they return to the
birthplace repeating the same life cycle as beforeChange the word
their
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