The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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diagram illustrates the life cycle of

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large fish called the

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.There are three main stages in the life cycle , beginning with

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eggs and ending with adult

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.

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have an average lifespan of 9 years.

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eggs are born by the mother

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fish in an upper river next to a lot of small stones and reeds. Approx of 5 to 6 months,fry which measures 3 to 8 centimetres. The fry

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swims to

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river and fast flowing .After growing up and feeding there for about 4 years the fry has become

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the smolt ,they reach 12 to 15 centimetres. After that, they swim to the open sea,where they grow up to adult

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which

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to 76 centimetres. The adult

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spend 5 years in the ocean and

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they return to

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birthplace repeating the same life cycle as before