The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
diagram illustrates the life cycle of
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species
of
a
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large fish called the
salmon
.There are three main stages in the life cycle , beginning with
salmon
eggs and ending with adult
salmon
.
Overall
,
Salmon
have an average lifespan of 9 years.
First,
Salmon
eggs are born by the mother
salmon
fish in an upper river next to a lot of small stones and reeds. Approx of 5 to 6 months,fry which measures 3 to 8 centimetres. The fry
then
swims to
lower
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river and fast flowing .After growing up and feeding there for about 4 years the fry has become
to
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the smolt ,they reach 12 to 15 centimetres. After that, they swim to the open sea,where they grow up to adult
salmon
which
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to 76 centimetres. The adult
salmon
spend 5 years in the ocean and
then
they return to
the
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birthplace repeating the same life cycle as before
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • freshwater streams
  • small pebbles
  • reeds
  • alevin
  • yolk sac
  • nourishment
  • fry
  • grow stronger
  • grow larger
  • parr
  • defined markings
  • estuaries
  • smolt
  • adapt to saltwater
  • ocean
  • full size
  • sexual maturity
  • spawn
  • life cycle
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