The table and chart below give information on police budget

The table and chart below give information on police budget
The table compares and contrasts the
budget
given to the police force from different
sources
.
Whereas
, the pie chart illustrates the money consumed for different sectors in the force during a 2-
year
time period from 2017 to 2018.
Overall
, most of the income for the
budget
Came from the national government.
However
, the least
sources
were from grants and so on .
While
the pie chart depicts that most
sources
from the
budget
were used for wages and the least was utilised for technology. On the one hand, 17.5
million
pounds
were collected from the national government for the police
budget
in 2017 , and 2018 ;
this
is an increase of 2.3
million
pounds
more
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in
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2018 .
While
, the local tax was the other major source that provide money for the police
budget
, and it was 91.2
million
pounds
in 2017 , and after one
year
, it has made up 11.1
million
pounds
more for the
budget
.
However
, the
last
portion of income for the scheme came from other
sources
, which was 38
million
pounds
in the initial
year
, and in the
last
year
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it remained almost identical ( 38.5
million
pounds
).
On the other hand
, a huge sum of money from the project was utilised for the salary packages of officers ' and staff and it recorded 75% in 2017.
However
, after a
year
, it had a fall in their support and reached 69% in 2018. Surprisingly, buildings and transport reported the same amount of spending in both years , which was only 17% respectively. Meanwhile, technology accounted for the lowest
budget
in 2017, and it was only 8% .
However
, in 2018 it had an 8% surge in the
budget
in the next
year
, which was 14%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, last, while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words budget, sources, million, pounds, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • allocation
  • budgetary constraints
  • community policing
  • economic conditions
  • expenditures
  • funding allocation
  • governmental policies
  • operational efficiency
  • personnel costs
  • public safety
  • resource allocation
  • revenue sources
  • surveillance technology
  • trend analysis
  • fiscal responsibility
  • capital investments
  • public sector spending
  • crime rate
  • policy reform
  • infrastructure upgrades
  • staff training
  • emergency response capabilities
  • fiscal year
  • financial oversight
  • budget cuts
  • incremental increase
  • law enforcement agencies
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