The table and chart below give information on police budget
The table compares and contrasts the 2018 .
budget
given to the police force from different sources
. Whereas
, the pie chart illustrates the money consumed for different sectors in the force during a 2-year
time period from 2017 to 2018.
Overall
, most of the income for the budget
Came from the national government. However
, the least sources
were from grants and so on . While
the pie chart depicts that most sources
from the budget
were used for wages and the least was utilised for technology.
On the one hand, 17.5 million
pounds
were collected from the national government for the police budget
in 2017 , and 2018 ; this
is an increase of 2.3 million
pounds
moreChange preposition
in
While
, the local tax was the other major source that provide money for the police budget
, and it was 91.2 million
pounds
in 2017 , and after one year
, it has made up 11.1 million
pounds
more for the budget
. However
, the last
portion of income for the scheme came from other sources
, which was 38 million
pounds
in the initial year
, and in the last
year
it remained almost identical ( 38.5 Add a comma
,year
million
pounds
).
On the other hand
, a huge sum of money from the project was utilised for the salary packages of officers ' and staff and it recorded 75% in 2017. However
, after a year
, it had a fall in their support and reached 69% in 2018. Surprisingly, buildings and transport reported the same amount of spending in both years , which was only 17% respectively. Meanwhile, technology accounted for the lowest budget
in 2017, and it was only 8% . However
, in 2018 it had an 8% surge in the budget
in the next year
, which was 14%.Submitted by varshajose345 on
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